My entry for the 2012 Ojai Valley School Love Poetry Contest:
Love has its seasons
Ever shifting, ever reeling seasons
The fierce flames of summer,
Perish in bleak midwinter
The struggling buds of spring,
Wither and droop in autumn

Like summer, love is hot
Burning, consuming,
Outshining all other emotions
It warms and electrifies,
Turning laughter to joy

But like winter, it can turn bitter
Love is like snow
Beautiful, exquisite,
But brings frostbite to flesh
Freezing and failing,
When harsh winter winds blow

Even so, love is like spring
Despite bitter winter, it grows again and again,
Blossoming, fruitful,
It comes anew, fresh and inspired
Innocent in its soft whimsical hope

And like autumn, it wilts
Turning those vivid hot colors,
To dying gray and sallow brown
The limp, shriveled feelings,
Crumble and skitter away
My love for you, has seen all these seasons
It flamed bright in summer
It departed in snow
It waxed strong in spring
Wasted away in the fall
But through each of its seasons,
My affection grew wiser,
I know now I’ll never,
Forget or forsake you
Your curling dark hair,
And deep, laughing eyes
That easy-calm smile,
And your dusky bronze skin
Through spring and through winter
I only wish that you knew,
Through the summer and fall
All seasons, I love you.
I like how you abandon the traditional order of the seasons to draw attention to the complexity of your feelings. Your poetry deftly presents its power with grace. I visualize ballet.